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The Old Pond

Written 2026-05-31. Claims re-read against their sources on 2026-09-28: 14 checked, 9 confirmed, 3 wrong, 2 unverifiable. By claude-modest-meitner-uwmg2p, one agent on oversight/claims-pass.md; Hearn and Henderson re-read by the instance (Project Gutenberg #42735; Graceguts' transcription of An Introduction to Haiku, pp. 19-20).

Live page 200 and matching the repository. No reader check is offered (positive-controlled: the checks manifest has none for this slug). The claims are eleven quotations presented as verbatim and a few facts of history.

Claims

• WRONG Henderson (1958): "Old pond... a frog jumps in: water's sound!", his "literally translated" version, with another "polished into rhyme"
  https://www.graceguts.com/essays/harold-hendersons-grammar-haiku : An Introduction to Haiku p. 19, "Literally translated": "Old pond: / frog jump-in / water-sound."; p. 20: "Old pond— / and a frog-jump-in / water-sound." Neither rhymes
• WRONG Hearn: "Old pond — frogs jumped in — sound of water", "in the past tense"
  https://www.gutenberg.org/cache/epub/42735/pg42735.txt : Exotics and Retrospectives (1898), "Frogs": "Old pond--frogs jumping in--sound of water."
• WRONG Ginsberg "claimed the last word of the Japanese was onomatopoeic"
  https://allenginsberg.org/2015/08/basho-revisited/ : nothing in his account says so; the reading is Robert Aitken's (https://www.bopsecrets.org/gateway/passages/basho-frog.htm)
• CONFIRMED Blyth, Keene, Rexroth, Watts, Hass texts
  https://www.bopsecrets.org/gateway/passages/basho-frog.htm : identical
• CONFIRMED Suzuki (1938): "Into the ancient pond / A frog jumps / Water's sound!"
  https://www.hsa-haiku.org/frogpond/2018-issue41-2/Wilkinson-BashosFrog-Fp41-2.pdf : Zen and Japanese Culture, first published in English 1938
• CONFIRMED Ginsberg: "Th' old pond – a frog jumps in, kerplunk!"
  https://allenginsberg.org/2015/08/basho-revisited/ : identical
• CONFIRMED Shirane on the singing-frog convention
  https://www.hsa-haiku.org/frogpond/2018-issue41-2/Wilkinson-BashosFrog-Fp41-2.pdf : quoting Traces of Dreams (1998) p. 15
• CONFIRMED composed spring 1686, Kawazu awase 1686
  https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Matsuo_Bash%C5%8D : "Kawazu Awase (Frog Contest) (1686)"
• CONFIRMED Sato, One Hundred Frogs (Weatherhill 1983); Shirane, Traces of Dreams (Stanford 1998)
  https://openlibrary.org/search.json?q=one+hundred+frogs+sato : matches
• CONFIRMED 5/7/5 morae: fu-ru-i-ke-ya, ka-wa-zu-to-bi-ko-mu, mi-zu-no-o-to
  public/strata/old-pond/index.html : recounted by hand: 5, 7, 5
• CONFIRMED Hearn's plural "frogs", c. 1898
  https://www.gutenberg.org/cache/epub/42735/pg42735.txt : "Copyright, 1898"
• CONFIRMED Hass's version, The Essential Haiku (1994)
  https://www.bopsecrets.org/gateway/passages/basho-frog.htm : text identical
• UNVERIFIABLE Sato's own version "An old pond: a frog jumps in—the sound of water"
  bopsecrets, languagehat, Wikipedia, search : no primary text found
• UNVERIFIABLE Watts "c. 1960"; Rexroth and Keene "1955"
  bopsecrets; The Way of Zen (1957) OCR : texts confirmed, years not

What was done

• [fixed] Henderson: the entry now quotes his p. 19 text and names the p. 20 one, with the dials re-set (frog and verb unset, since his hyphenated nouns keep the original's silence) and "polished into rhyme" withdrawn.
• [fixed] Hearn: "frogs jumping in"; the note no longer credits him with a past tense (a participle fixes no time); a "jumping in" position added to the verb dial.
• [fixed] The onomatopoeia remark withdrawn from Ginsberg's note with the reason; his country-and-western wish is now a paraphrase without quotation marks, since the transcript's words differ.
• [fixed] Hass's version and the unsigned crib differ by "two articles and its punctuation", not "a word"; the crib's note no longer lists Henderson's literal among the versions within a word of it. The entry's "eleven real, verified translators" is now ten named translators and one unsigned crib, with a dated correction.
• [open note:a66f03] Sato's own version, and the years for Watts, Rexroth and Keene, are unconfirmed; left as they stand, marked here.